This is the essay I wrote for my Modern American History college class. I did not turn in this essay because of some unusual circumstances, so instead of letting this piece of crap go to waste, I’ll let you guys read it (and grade me!).
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T/TH AMH / 370 Words
The Progress of Peace
Humanity has a long history of large-scale fights, a history that goes back beyond the point where they were first called Homo sapiens. Over time we have developed the ability to think critically and reason, which has allowed us to come up with alternatives to killing those who have conflicting intentions. In modern times, the numbers of people that have been against wars have increased, and many groups have pooled social strength to attempt to make peace a reality.
In the 1800s, America had the desire to stop European colonization of the western hemisphere, and the Monroe Doctrine was signed to recognize the intention officially. European nations didn’t recognize the authority of such a document, but they didn’t contest it. There was still a concern over Spain’s ownership of Cuba, and when reports came in about atrocities committed by the Spanish there, the United States government decided to take action. The Anti-Imperialist League formed to make sure Cuba wasn’t taken over, and that the United States wouldn’t become an imperialist nation.
During World War One, the US Fellowship of Reconciliation was formed to support the rights of conscious objectors. At the time, the general public intention was to stay out of the war, but when a German submarine sunk the Lusitania with American civilians on board, the anti-war support dwindled. Although submarine warfare in the area was reduced, America entered the war soon after.
After World War One, a lot of groups looked into ways to prevent the United States from getting involved in another war. However, trouble brewing overseas would eventually force America fully into it due to an attack by Japan at Pearl Harbor, Hawaii. Due to the clear human rights violations being committed by the enemy, there was very little protest in regards to entering this war.
Anti-war movements have had varying levels of success throughout history, but the intention of saving lives through reasonably conducted discussion or just avoiding becoming involved in someone else’s conflict altogether has always been a major driving force. Perhaps one day humanity will be able to use reasoning and humility to overcome all conflict and reach conclusions that are in the best interest of everyone involved.
(^ End of essay)
That’s how I write when I have to keep it in “introduction, three paragraphs, conclusion” format. I’ve never really been a fan of that, but I’ve had to do it so many times in school that turning in something that isn’t that feels like it’ll cost me a chance at a good grade.
So, grade me on your standards. Perhaps you could help me shake that mental block I have in regards to the essay format. Maybe you still consider trolling an art. Perhaps you have fallen asleep while reading this, and your head was able to type out a bunch of letters before hitting enter. Have at it!
